Class Webpage http://hal.ucr.edu/~cathy/f99-4508.html
Teacher: CathyDecker
Office: LA-7D
Phone: 909-941-2412
Mailbox: LA-10
Office Hours: Mon. andWed. 9:30-11 am
ALSO Mon. 2-3 pm
Tues.and Thurs. 10-10:30 am
(No office hours Thurs. 11/11)
Email (home): cathy@languagemachines.com
Email(UCR office): cathy@hal.ucr.edu
FAX: 909-941-2632 (Chaffey)
Dear Students,
Hi! Welcome to English 450, Fundamentals of Composition!In this class we focus on what makes a great paragraph. I believe a goodparagraph has an insightful, clear topic sentence; a sufficient amountof vivid, concrete, and relevant supporting detail; a clear, logical order;grammatical and mechanical excellence; and style, tone, and diction thatare appropriate to the topic and audience. We will work on understanding,producing, and evaluating good writing.
We will be using a graph to measure our achievement ofour goals. This graph, called a capacity matrix, will also be used to calculategrades. Because this is an unconventional educational system, itis important that you monitor yourself to make sure you understand howthe class works, how the matrix is used to grade assignments, and how youare progressing towards your final grade. Be sure to tell me in person,by phone, by email, or by fax if you need help with these key conceptsor any of the we are trying to master.
With best wishes for a good semester,
Cathy Decker, Ph.D.
| D | D+ | C | C+ | B- | B | B+ | A- | A | A+ | ||
| 0-54 | 55-62 | 63-67 | 68-73 | 74-77 | 78-80 | 81-83 | 84-86 | 87-89 | 90-92 | 93-95 | 96-99 |
Course Objectives
Upon completion of this course, the student will beable to do the following.
1. Gain an appreciation of the aesthetic and literarycharacteristics of good writing. (Our capacity matrix breaks this downinto eight capacities or skills.)
2. Develop the ability to think logically and expressthoughts in clear, effective prose. (This breaks down into eighteen capacitiesor skills.)
3. Explain and be better able to apply the principlesunderlying the creation of unified and coherent paragraphs. (See note afterobjective eight.)
4. Recognize and formulate clear and specific topic sentencesand develop these into unified and complete paragraphs. (See note afterobjective eight.)
5. Analyze the structure of various kinds of paragraphdevelopment, including exposition and argumentation, and construct paragraphsin such patterns. (See note after objective six.)
6. Demonstrate an understanding of the various logicalrelationships of ideas within a paragraph and apply these in their ownwritings. (A combination of objectives five and six breaks down into twentydifferent capacities or skills.)
7. Study their own grammatical and punctuation errorsto make their writing more effective. (This goal breaks down intofifty different capacities or skills.)
8. Study and practice the coherency and rhetorical devicesthat make a paragraph rational, clear, and aesthetically sound. (The overlappingobjectives three, four, and eight together break down into thirty-fourcapacities or skills.)
Chaffey's 450 Writing Requirement
A minimum of 1500 written words, excluding revisions,will be required of each student in the course.
The Grade Formula
| Prose Writing Assignments Average | 65% |
What Are Participation Points?
During our first class we will determine what we willgive participation points for. When this policy is finalized, I will givea copy to each class member. Basically I will keep a running tabof the maximum number of points a person can get. Because the maximumwill be indicative of giving 110%, that number will equal 110% (11 pointsout of a possible of ten)! I will then calculate what number of participationpoints earns a 100%. What percent of these points that you have isyour participation-point grade. Feel free to email me or cometo office hours to clarify this!
We will give participation points for the following.
1. Arriving at 11 AM ready to go
2. Sharing a computer or handout
3. Helping students with the computer or a class problem
4. Behaving in a way that causes another student to nominate you for a point.
5. Attending college book events
6. Having perfect attendance.
As a class, we agree to treat each other in the following way.
1. We will not be mean to each other, but rather be polite to each other.
2. We will speak loudly so everyone can hear and tell everyone our name.
3. We will tell speakers when we can't hear what they are saying.
4. We will ask questions when we don't understand something.
5. We believe that there is no such thing as a dumb question.
6. We will not call anyone dumb or stupid.
7. We will be positive and give advice and suggestions, rather than just criticism.
8. We will not bring devices that ring or beep or turn them off.
9. We won't make loud noises with gum or our hands and feet that are distracting to others.
Required Supplies
Good Things We Want in This Class . . .
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Things that I Avoid and that I’d Like the Classto Avoid . . .
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Chart to Track the Class Schedule
As the class determines assignments and due dates,we will fill in this chart.
Methods | ||||
English Skills pages 477-481 | ||||
Peer Review Exercise | English Skills pages 1-49 | Bring a paragraph written in the format described in your textbook. Bring two extra copies of the paragraph (or an IBM-formatted disk with the text on it) for peer-reviewing. | ||
Portfolio Preparation | Bring your capacity matrix, portfolio, and porfolio material to class (your paragraphs, peer review sheets, revisions, and textbook exercises) | |||
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English Skills pages 75-81 | ||||
| portfolio work | ||||
| Focus on the novel | ||||
| Unity, Support | ||||
| Coherence | Finish textbook exercises up to page 130 | |||
| Focus on the novel | Do sentence skills diagnostic and grade self; then do corrections. See textbook pages 241-6 | |||
| Sentence Skills/Capital Letters | Portfolio Check | |||
| Quotation Marks, Effective Word Choice | Do exercises pages 360-1. | |||
| Dangling Modifiers, Misplaced Modifiers, Faulty Parallelism | Do exercises pages 336-7, 342, 345-6. (These will go in your portfolio.) | |||
| Subjects and Verbs, Run-Ons | Do exercises pages 247-51 and 272-86 | |||
| Run-on Review, Pronouns | Do exercises pages 315-22. | |||
| More on Subjects and Verbs and Run-Ons; Narrative Peer Review | Portfolio Work | |||
| Fragments | Do exercises pages 252-271, have your narrative revised for the next portfolio. | |||
| Movie on Barbara Kingsolver | Catch up on your reading | Work on Sentence Skills sections, which run from pages 247 to 454, doing sections on the skills problems that you identified in your diagnostic test (pages 241-6) as difficult for you to do. | ||
| Definition | Do exercise p. 179; select a topic to write a definition paper on from pages 179-183 and do a list, bubble diagram, or freewrite on this topic. | |||
| Definition Paper Peer Review | Revise your definition paper. | |||
| Final Portfolio Check | ||||
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